My #2 sentences...

My sentence choice: "The man pulled out a handgun and started chasing the doctor around the office." I got this sentence when I read the Seattle Times newspaper online. It was updated at 2:03 AM last night. The Seattle Times http://seattletimes.nwsource.com/html/localnews/2003923857_gunman04m.html . This sentence uses the Consistent Tense. It uses Pulled and Started to show the action relationships. I think it has a strong structure, and it used the same tense in one sentence. We need to learn from it for AW5. My new sentence: My teacher used consistent tense and taught me how to use it.

My #1 sentence...

My sentence choice "Study hard, work hard".
I got this sentence when i review my Holes book the teacher give me last quarter. This sentence only have 2 verbs and 2 adj, but it makes a strong sentence.
It is a short sentence but it show enough meaning of this sentence. Besides, it is very strong and it make a reader need to pay attention on it. Sometimes I am so lazy, I don't wanna do everything. I just remember this sentence and it wakes me up. I think we need to use more sentences like that in AW5.
My new sentence: "Be your self, you will succeed"